Description: umm ok i was jus kinna thinkin about skateboarders.i think the way they move when they're skating is sexy. umm....yeah.... ok go ahead tell me it's horrid, terrible, all that. then have a good day.
--~Mal:-)
You fall
so gracefully
into beautiful
swaying
rythms
back and forth
back and forth
Your arms
so heavily
into vigorous
swinging motions
back and forth
back and forth
Your body
constantly pulling
into erotic folding hymns
in and out
in and out
between gasps of breath
and tears of sweat
you move me like a predator
would move his prey into spontaneous spasms
and i long to feel your swinging, swaying, folding
on me
in me
until the board
twists!
into a stop.
Hey man, for me change to title to: The Shark's Eye. and the concept being that, a drowning swimmer. Now having done that - if you would This would be MY fav. of all time
Great way 2 describe a boarder! It was a rhythmic piece and a bit sensual too! Athletes are sexy & boarders & such are definetly athletes! I tried to skateboard once down my brother's half-pipe & fell on my a@! Thanks for sharing! Love, Peace, Joy! Happy Friday!
Submission Name: Skateboarder
