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    dots Submission Name: My Respitedots
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    Author: Toxic Rose
    Elite Ratio:    5.82 - 159/220/97
    Words: 155
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Description:
       This is what I feel when I'm up on the stage, acting. I guess I feel more myself when I'm acting, even more so than when I'm running. I just wanna know what you first thought when you read this. Can you relate? And if you can't, can you imagine it? I want to paint a vivid picture, and if this isn't getting through to you very well, go ahead and say so. My feelings won't get hurt... I'll just TRY to get better. Tee hee.



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    dotsMy Respitedots
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    Caught up in something I could never understand
    Wanting to touch this power, I hold out my hand
    But next thing I know, I'm up on the stage;
    Just so you might know, this place is my own free land.

    This feeling overwhelms, inside my spirit soars
    How I wish I could stay in here forevermore
    It's a safe haven, where I can express
    As fierce as a lion, I can let out a roar

    In this sacred place, I've the controls to myself
    The strings to my life taken off the dusty shelf
    Here my eyes open, so wide and alert
    For once, there's no need for me to cry out for help

    Standing in the spotlight, my heart reflected bright
    Gazing straight forward, there is no end to my sight
    There will be a big future, a big life
    But through it all, 'twill always be here- my respite.




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