Description: Amazing how much poetry one can write when they're depressed and lost after a break up huh?
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Darkness seeps into my chest
A constant reminder of love lost
The beat of your heart still Pounding in my ears
Your kisses still linger on my lips
empty promises lie stagnent in the air
Forever will my heart weep in silence
Silence... My soul cries out.... unheard
Sleep my only Solace...
Eyes heavy as they fall, welcoming the midnight Behind lidded curtains
The beginning to an end........
that's purely painful. you're right, it's amazing how much we can write when we're hurting. it's almost like if we're happy then we're numb. but every now and then someone comes along and it's happiness that's so overwhelming that you write as passionately as you ever have. i'm going thru that right now... i'm sorry you went thru that pain...i hope there will be an end to it.
nice i like. personally i kinda think writing is an outlet, so it's only natural that there's so much more to write when one's upset, after all if it's an outlet, who really wants to write when they're happy? Back to this poem though. Very appeasing, good word, choice and picture. however i do think a change in formation would benefit it some.