Short and Sweet. Okay, but I think it needs at least one more stanza to it. Also a egginning , middle and end. Well that is the way I see it at least. it was a good descriptive poem made you think about what it was that you was readng that is for syre but yea I agree with the others it needs something more to it
Hmmmmm i agree with Haecceity on not being sure what is meant to be had or how it is nostalgic...because it is short, however, you can incorporate your own meaning, which makes the shortness good, on the other hand, if you lengethened it you can personally involove more of the audience with more feeling...your choice, it could be good either way.