Mmmm, hotness. Phone sex, yum. Okay, you've totally reduced me to monosyllabic nonsense, happy? Never had phone sex but have masturbated while talking to someone on the phone (they didn't know what I was doing, though...makes it kinda exciting). Keep up all this dead sexiness, makes it fun for the rest of us.
very interesting. damn! this piece is almost like reading one of erotic romantic/drama novels. you know those books where on the cover there is always a half-naked man and woman all hugged up! but anyways you have a lot of potiential and it seems like this is a personal poem. even though this isn't really my style, you kept my interest!
You are crazy! Talk about me being freaky! That was good girl, I liked it a lot. The ending was funny though. Must be nice to enjoy yourself so much! That sounds fun now I might have to try that one day. Well I got more stuff coming I've just been busy So we can enjoy each others freakiness now lol Well ima go read more of your stuff peace Mysterious
Now this was raw and very descriptive. Writing a poem rhyming about phone sex is certainly unique. This was like reading a rhyming r- rated racey article in playboy wow. Cant criticize don't see anything technically wrong the language is a bet raw for my taste but you can't please everybody. `always write poetry, Cheryl.
wow... very descriptive. very... uh, intense. hmm, what's this dude's number?? nah just kidding. this was... i don't even know, all i know is where can i find one?! can't really give you any comments here... bout to flip through the yellow pages...
This was explicit...although Pappie...is actually spelled Papi...
You really went into detail and got the whole erotic thing going on. I like the more clean erotic poems but you have your own style and I commend you for that. I can say that your style may be a little too raw and overboard at times. The key to success is to write in a form that you will attract more people. Your reactions and comments may grow if you cleaned up a little bit.
I don't really know what to say, this is very hot! It must be good, cos you had me reading it with YOUR voice, and it all seemed to feel right as I read along with your ever-increasing excitement. Can't really criticize anything, just give us all his number! Be Happy Graeme