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    Author: DonKB
    ASL Info:    34/m/goergia
    Elite Ratio:    3.33 - 19/17/11
    Words: 78
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 1059
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    Unknown
    My heart it breaks for the love i've known
    But is not my own
    But belongs to the one unknown
    To here the wispers in the dark
    Of a love thats true at heart
    That binds together the ones that fate tore apart
    From now till then till dusk it harks
    The love so true that will not part


    Donnie Kahrl Brown II

    2005 Donnie Kahrl Brown II





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