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    dots Submission Name: Currentzdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 239
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 567
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 767



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       Ah, driving home via Lake Almanor and Quimcy & Green, green Chester, picking up kool hitchiker & making a new friend ; > }

    Emerson on Uses of great men, "We have never come at the true and best benefit of any genius, so long as we believe him an original force. In the moment when he ceases to help us as a cause, he begins to help us move as an "effect"."

    Happy Daze & smiles 2 my soul brothers and sisters
    bubbles of creation, disciples of Love, Beauty, Creation.. Love, Peace, Joy!!!


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    dotsCurrentzdots
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    Whether existing in
    this physical vessel
    or
    existing on a spiritual plane
    All is animated and
    infinite
    n
    e
    r
    g
    Y

    Whatever one believes
    IS
    basis for "1z"
    TRUTH

    Does a tree mock "it's"
    existance
    by offering itself to
    BE
    burned in the cycle of nature?

    Or does "IT" elevate "itself"
    to nurturing the soild
    with fHE gift of
    "IT's"
    Life (SELF).....




    Submitted on 2005-05-02 09:20:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This has it's moments and it's melody and has a impressive dignity about it.
    I like how, if only briefly, an unexpected moment of silence while throwing your letters down the room. Very nice.
    | Posted on 2005-05-03 00:00:00 | by childs | [ Reply to This ]
      Now this is a Tiff style type of poem that I have grown accoustom to and I can understand and relate to. Your style is of absoulte freestyle and it works effectively. " All is animated and
    infinite
    n
    e
    r
    g
    Y"

    is the meat of this deep reflection. Always write poetry, Cheryl.
    | Posted on 2005-05-02 00:00:00 | by ladyngold | [ Reply to This ]
      Meery Meet Epiphany.
    Awesome poem! I love the hidden message in it! At first I thought you had just mistyped a number of things. But from your past work, I knew you weren't that sloppy. Thats the only reason I really got it in 2 readings. LOL. I'm quite slow. Great job. Thanks for giving me more material to try. Blessed Be Andrea
    | Posted on 2005-05-02 00:00:00 | by magickandie | [ Reply to This ]
      Hi Tiff, missed ya! This is real nice, and I liked your other one too, although this is better.
    It IS hard to tell what's an intentional typo with your work, but I liked reading the capitals:
    TRUTH...BE IT...HE ITSELF
    God, you're deep! Great thought waves you've started,
    Be Happy, now

    Graeme
    | Posted on 2005-05-02 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this. One thing-'it's' should be 'its' for the possessive. I don't know whether you did that intentionally (with your work sometimes it's hard to tell) but it seems like that's what it should be in the context. Anyway, nice write.

    Peace,

    Joey
    | Posted on 2005-05-02 00:00:00 | by joeyalphabet | [ Reply to This ]


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