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    dots Submission Name: Love?dots
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    Author: PiecesOfMyHeart
    ASL Info:    14/f/PA
    Elite Ratio:    3.47 - 22/21/9
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 301
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 532



    Description:
       I actually started this poem going in a totally differant direction and with a totally differant piece of my life in mind. However I couldn't think how to continue in that direction so I turned it into a seperate poem which I will later post.


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    dotsLove?dots
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    Not seeing,
    what you look at when you're with me.
    Not knowing,
    if together is were you want to be.
    Not understanding,
    hidden thoughts in your head.
    Not comprehending,
    the meaning of words that you've said.
    Not speaking,
    I'll ruin the mood, I fear.
    Not beleiving,
    words you wisper- softly, tenderly- in my ear.
    Not realising,
    that some people are worthy of trust.
    Not loving,
    for I know this feeling is just lust.




    Submitted on 2005-05-03 17:44:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      um . . i wanna say something to that pestiferous person. . . . . . . u shouldnt start things off first off all that is jus PLAIN RUDE! And to the writer. . I think it was great. .you did mistype a few things BUT its was still really awesome! I could TRULY relate to EVERYTHING it said. Ive been there, ya know! GOOD JOB!
    | Posted on 2005-05-03 00:00:00 | by Blindly-N-Love | [ Reply to This ]
      first of all...you need to work on your spelling...
    this write isn't bad but using a word over and over will bring it down a notch...try replacing
    "not" with diferent words to bring your write to life...
    | Posted on 2005-05-03 00:00:00 | by pestiferous | [ Reply to This ]



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