I believe your word imagery paints a grim picture of what live would be without love successfully. The very first stanza "No dreams Wasted time Wasted breath Silent death." was a very strong start and you concluded strongly also with "No love Fallen truth Fallen hard Forever scarred." A creative write. `always write poetry, Cheryl.
Well, I think you have described life without love pretty good here. And the format fits with this write...nice flow and rhythm.. it reads well. For what is LIFE, without LOVE?? - wasted, broken, empty, lost, tired, fallen... < - very good word usage. Nicely done! Take Care! ~Sandra