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    dots Submission Name: Exit Bacadots
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    Author: gavinspikenard
    ASL Info:    20-something/m/USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.85 - 274/334/104
    Words: 68
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsExit Bacadots
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    I know what my name means
    and also what my prayer requests
    "Jabez the scourge, Jabez the cursed"
    I do not accept such bestowed implications
    My territory shall stretch out further than ever
    and blessings shall rain from Heaven indeed
    No evil shall befall me
    Just as I myself wish to never cause pain
    This faith defeats a life-sized trial
    The weeping will simply cease to be




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