"there was blood on his left hand and on his right his last sin."
That line "spoke" to me. The whole poem spoke to me actually. That poem was beautifully written...you show the lighter side of the dark, if that's possible. I personally think its perfect the way it is.
This was good even though i don't like religious pieces. This discrpiton was great and the images i have from the poem was good. the only thing i would change that i would add more to the middle and inlaberate in way this person is doing this. other than tha it was good my fave line was
wow. that was amazing. I love all the imagry you use in this. just reading this, I could see everything so vividly. great work. on a downside, I didn't think the flow of the second stanza worked very well. it was good and it made a lot of logical sence in the poem, however, the structure of it just didn't flow ver well with the rest of the poem. anyways, good work and I hope to read more of your work soon. welcome to Elite Skills.