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Life


Author: BuckeyeBoy
ASL Info:    14/m/Cleveland
Elite Ratio:    2.06 - 1 /2 /2
Words: 59
Class/Type: Poetry /Comedy
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Description:


don't ask...


Life



milkshakes
lemonade
baseball
minute maid
chickens
words
mayo
birds
don't know
don't care
shaving cream..
huh? where?!
sausage
a big fat lion
flags and
pizza that's hawaiian
matches
speach
James and
his peach
keys
TV shows
honey pots
a large nose
resumes
robber guys
computers
and french fries
garbage man
lucky clover
Mah Jongg
GAME OVER





Submitted on 2005-05-04 12:09:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  ummm... ok i really dont understand is this a portrayal of what everyone goes through in life what everyone expaeriences till poof and it's over
| Posted on 2005-05-04 00:00:00 | by Darkwarrior | [ Reply to This ]


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