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    dots Submission Name: Lifedots
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    Author: BuckeyeBoy
    ASL Info:    14/m/Cleveland
    Elite Ratio:    2.06 - 1/2/2
    Words: 59
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
    Total Views: 1239
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 586



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    dotsLifedots
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    milkshakes
    lemonade
    baseball
    minute maid
    chickens
    words
    mayo
    birds
    don't know
    don't care
    shaving cream..
    huh? where?!
    sausage
    a big fat lion
    flags and
    pizza that's hawaiian
    matches
    speach
    James and
    his peach
    keys
    TV shows
    honey pots
    a large nose
    resumes
    robber guys
    computers
    and french fries
    garbage man
    lucky clover
    Mah Jongg
    GAME OVER





    Submitted on 2005-05-04 12:09:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ummm... ok i really dont understand is this a portrayal of what everyone goes through in life what everyone expaeriences till poof and it's over
    | Posted on 2005-05-04 00:00:00 | by Darkwarrior | [ Reply to This ]


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