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    dots Submission Name: Crystal Cleardots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 513
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 282



    Description:
       Just looking at the dangling crystal wind chime & what <@> saw within "IT".

    "Man is his own star; and the soul that can
    Render an honest and a perfect man,
    Commands all light, all influence, all fate,
    Nothing to him falls early or too late.
    Our acts our angels are, or good or ill,
    Our fatal shadows that walk by us still."
    Epilogue to Beaumont and Fletcher's Honest Man's Fortune

    Love,Peace,Joy!!!


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    dotsCrystal Cleardots
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    A Crystal Home
    reflected in the
    apex of "IT'z"
    <@>
    F
    L o a
    T
    i
    N
    g
    doorway []
    reflection
    mirrored derorrim




    Submitted on 2005-05-04 17:54:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Floating crystals are kind of like smoking crystals, their inner beauty is unique to each person, gives them a different perspective. This was a nice soliloque to floating above all else while maintaining a solid crystal form. At least thats what I got out of it. Have a gr8 one and keep smilin'
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    | Posted on 2005-05-04 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]


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