Wow, this is really touching. Maybe because i relate to it so much. I really understand this and can feel the feelings. It flows well and tells a story simply yet effectively. I like how much detail and description you put into this... good job.
Thanks peoples. It's kinda the way I used to think about the best way to kill myself. I think I like expreesing myself this way, though. Sorry Jeremy. Something bad just happened so I'm in a permanent bad mood. I am really sorry though Jeremy. :(
Unlike the comment you left me... I did read your poem. It was indeed sad... but it was.. good to read (I'd say enjoyable, but enjoyable to a poem that is about something depressing, just isn't the right word to use). I didn't ask for the comment you gave me though... I don't see why people like reminding me how much they hate me... I've heard it enough and I still don't care. But besides that, good poem.