Cant look back
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This a hard poem for me to post. it was a long time ago and im kinda afraid of the feedback...but please dont resist.
Cant look back
I’m scared and not quite Sure what to do I have all this hate inside me Because of all the shit you put me through As I’m walking down the road I’m not sure what’s before me My mind is in this crazy mode I open the front door A door I’ve gone through So many times before In your room, I’m standing over you You don’t even know what’s before you I hold this knife Ready to take your life As it sinks into your heart I remember how you Made my life fall apart As I take the knife out I remember what this is all about You lay there in your bed So silent, so calm Only because you’re dead |
Submitted on 2005-05-04 18:15:55 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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wow! VERY well done to channel those intense emotions onto paper. Kinda scary to realize we all have that potential and there are so many people out there who can bring it out in us Hope you feel better these days. Careful who you give your heart to good expression!!| | Posted on 2005-05-09 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ] | it is morbid and dark, but no one ever said poetry wasnt that. There was alot of different feelings conveyed in this poem. But it all flowed together really well and was clear. Good job | | Posted on 2005-05-08 00:00:00 | by rockunsilenced | [ Reply to This ] | even though it is a tiny bit morbid i like it. i mean who hasnt felt that way before. good job with the flow and rythm you did a great job keep it up | | Posted on 2005-05-05 00:00:00 | by sweet_rayne | [ Reply to This ] | This was a bit morbid, but still really good. I loved the way you had this flow, even though I don't really like these kinds of poems. | | Posted on 2005-05-04 00:00:00 | by Akili | [ Reply to This ] | |
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