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Cant look back


Author: Enleigh
ASL Info:    16/f/WI
Elite Ratio:    2.32 - 21 /32 /13
Words: 137
Class/Type: Poetry /Angry
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This a hard poem for me to post. it was a long time ago and im kinda afraid of the feedback...but please dont resist.


Cant look back



I’m scared and not quite
Sure what to do
I have all this hate inside me
Because of all the shit you put me through

As I’m walking down the road
I’m not sure what’s before me
My mind is in this crazy mode

I open the front door
A door I’ve gone through
So many times before

In your room, I’m standing over you
You don’t even know what’s before you

I hold this knife
Ready to take your life

As it sinks into your heart
I remember how you
Made my life fall apart

As I take the knife out
I remember what this is all about

You lay there in your bed
So silent, so calm
Only because you’re dead




Submitted on 2005-05-04 18:15:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  wow! VERY well done to channel those intense emotions onto paper. Kinda scary to realize we all have that potential and there are so many people out there who can bring it out in us Hope you feel better these days. Careful who you give your heart to good expression!!
| Posted on 2005-05-09 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]
  it is morbid and dark, but no one ever said poetry wasnt that. There was alot of different feelings conveyed in this poem. But it all flowed together really well and was clear. Good job
| Posted on 2005-05-08 00:00:00 | by rockunsilenced | [ Reply to This ]
  even though it is a tiny bit morbid i like it. i mean who hasnt felt that way before. good job with the flow and rythm you did a great job keep it up
| Posted on 2005-05-05 00:00:00 | by sweet_rayne | [ Reply to This ]
  This was a bit morbid, but still really good. I loved the way you had this flow, even though I don't really like these kinds of poems.
| Posted on 2005-05-04 00:00:00 | by Akili | [ Reply to This ]


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