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    dots Submission Name: To Whom it May Concern:dots
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    Author: Amberdy
    ASL Info:    21/F/TX
    Elite Ratio:    4.37 - 240/232/59
    Words: 159
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 199
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1033



    Description:
       This is just a little thing I wrote for fun, because I am so tired of falling for the wrong guys, so I I'm just going to wait until I find Mr. Perfect. I might add more if I think of anything else to go along with it.


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    dotsTo Whom it May Concern:dots
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    To whom it may concern:
    Seeking male applicants that fit this exact description. NO EXCEPTIONS!

    Blue Eyes are a plus, but not a must
    A good smile is required of course.
    Height is important (I myself am 5'8").
    Any hair color is fine, preferably straight
    (and yes, I'll admitt, I do like blondes).
    Muscles are good, okay they're great,
    but not too many (I don't want an Arnold).
    A good heart is an absolute must.
    (no ifs, ands or buts!)
    Honesty, sympathy, and understanding
    are all required to the fullest extent
    Patience is a key factor.
    Must be willing to respect me completely,
    (And it wouldn't hurt to spoil the hell out of me).
    Has to love me like never before,
    And has to be willing to spend the rest of his life
    making me the happiest woman in the world.

    If you are interested in this position,
    Please send your resume and full description.




    Submitted on 2005-05-04 18:39:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I liked it. I don't think you tried too hard to rhyme, and it didn't worry me at all, I was too interested to see just what more you wanted out of your Prince Charming!
    Well done, a nice little distraction
    Be Happy
    Graeme
    | Posted on 2005-05-04 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]
      This is quite interesting and I'm sure more could be added ...but you have quite a good take on what's needed in a good guy for you. I enjoyed the read. I kinda like all the requirements you have here. Hope you get lucky :)
    Nice write!
    ~Sandra
    | Posted on 2005-05-04 00:00:00 | by Intricate1 | [ Reply to This ]
      hmmmmmmm...I can't really relate since i've never looked for the perfect guy :P...However, there is this guy named Bob...And C. Starr wrote this poem about him...ok, that's all I'm gonna say...This was funny and I think humor was your intent (or maybe you're actually posting this in a newspaper <shrug> who knows :)> Actually that is a good idea...maybe actually asking for all the attributes that you seek will bring you the perfect guy :)

    Anyways good luck!

    S
    T
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    | Posted on 2005-05-05 00:00:00 | by Stwcjj | [ Reply to This ]


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