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A Lame Haiku


Author: confusing myslf
ASL Info:    14/f/WA
Elite Ratio:    2.74 - 25 /35 /11
Words: 15
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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I just joined this site and I have virtually no writing skills as you can see by my lame haiku here. I try to write, yet I never succeed, so I stop trying. So then, what's the point of trying?


A Lame Haiku



My writing is lame.
I try, I fail, I give up.
Why do I bother?




Submitted on 2005-05-05 00:22:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  LOL! Nice haiku. It's okay, I'm sure you'll get better. I did. So did Hayley, as well as everyone else who has joined eliteskills- keep writing and it'll get easier to pour out onto paper.

JeLLY BeaN
| Posted on 2005-06-30 00:00:00 | by Toxic Rose | [ Reply to This ]
  I agree you can’t write any better then me. We’re all here to improve though. So, as long as your having fun, you should keep posting your crap. I know I’m going to keep putting up mine :)
| Posted on 2005-05-11 00:00:00 | by Cloud_lion | [ Reply to This ]
  Heyy, you relax! Think of something you feel, pen it down even if it's too simple. The comments would help you make it better. :)

Welcome to E.S!
| Posted on 2005-05-05 00:00:00 | by vedanta19 | [ Reply to This ]
  I love it! best damn haiku ever! -cough- riiight... i just need the %'s. anyways, you know it...er... sucks... work on it a bit and dont comment on mine. my % is low enough already
| Posted on 2005-06-03 00:00:00 | by Sephiroth | [ Reply to This ]


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