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    dots Submission Name: Land of Make Believedots
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    Author: Destined
    ASL Info:    17/f/wisconsin
    Elite Ratio:    5.29 - 86/68/17
    Words: 244
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 232
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       Just wondering if I was a soul that happenes to be wondering about it a world where everyone's the same.


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    dotsLand of Make Believedots
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    Life in the world is an endless journey.
    For we have lived and for we will die.
    Will we find life in the land of tyranny of liberty?
    Could their lives be a lie?
    For the soul is an unbound mist in the air
    Life as we live it is as unmeaningful as lighting a candle in the wind.
    Would anyone care?
    If they died today, tomorrow will there be no one to free their souls for which they have sinned?
    No way to live in the Land of Make Believe
    No way to leave.
    The gates of Hell have sucked the life from within
    As they are faced with total damnation as we think of what we accoplished.
    But what if there is nothing, not light nor dark, just a blank where empty souls must travel.
    As the journey to the Land of Dreams comes to reality will no one pitty them?
    Will they forever be lost and have no one to care as they sit in the darkness of a shed?
    The emptiness is unbearable or so a marvel.
    For the darkness captivates us in the eyes of death who beckons them.
    For they can not see Neither think, nor breath.
    I sit in the Land of Make Believe,
    Things we cannot percive.
    Yet the light of hope and dreams guide and help us to live peacefully.
    As together and as one, we sit in the Land of Make Believe.




    Submitted on 2005-05-05 07:02:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Well that is an interesting one and gets the mind agoin' im gonna have fun with trying to figure it out completely and i think it is about our beleifs in the afterlife.
    | Posted on 2005-05-10 00:00:00 | by sammute naru | [ Reply to This ]
      Awesome nanana, I loved For the soul is an unbound mist in the air Life as we live it is as unmeaningful as lighting a candle in the wind.
    that is such a cool line i wish i thought of it.
    | Posted on 2005-05-05 00:00:00 | by Fadingperson | [ Reply to This ]



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