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    dots Submission Name: Ode to Poetrydots

    Author: vedanta19
    Elite Ratio:    3.28 - 503/510/143
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
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       Poetry lets all the sighs of sorrow and
    cheer of happiness out. A thank you to it :)
    Hope you all can identify with this :)

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    dotsOde to Poetrydots

    This little verses like..

    rain-drops on lily-braced vase
    early fog on the winter-touched window pane,
    a lone tired traveller on a stalled train
    over the rusted tracks
    to the highest mountain peak;


    sighs from a wailing soul
    careless whispers of sweet-nothings
    new spring-time loves
    forced changes for better-self
    standing strong
    walking right
    twilight at the corner of proud owner moonlit night
    sunflowers, lilies, rainbow
    blood-stained weapon of end
    blue-coated silver-lined sky
    ivory-splashed sea
    shakespeare, frost, neruda
    memories unshared
    rhyme, metaphor, paradox
    uncertain tomorrows
    unclear, confusing todays sometimes
    the mind, peace, people

    Thank you, o ye little verses
    sadness and joy
    my sole friend
    the inner me.

    Submitted on 2005-05-05 07:24:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hey thanx fo the knock on untitled why dont you pick a name for this one,that you commented on antway you poem was geat once again very moving with true words fom your soulsory about the delete of work i guess i deleted 300 from this site but they ae apart of me so i no i can write them again maybe in you next comment tell me your favorite 3 and i will rewite as i have never had this request before
    nice wite and geat ead
    | Posted on 2005-05-05 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      ohh i love it! it's great! and so true. poetry is such a wonderful outlet for expression...for emotion. i would be nothing without it. thank you for writing this wonderful poem reminding me of what a great thing poetry in itself is. ^.^
    | Posted on 2005-05-05 00:00:00 | by darkness child | [ Reply to This ]

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