This piece brought back memories, not so good ones, but it reminded me of how one person can so easily use another, then discard them as if they were garbage. Unfortunately, it happens all the time. You've played a picture for the reader, and at least for me, it was simply put, very 'in your face' , very real. As if it just happened yesterday.
fair. I'd advise thinking outside the box when it comes to composure/structuralization. Seems faint fore importance, but provides a completely different read, for your sake i hope it was at least ribbed, or her sensation