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    dots Submission Name: Cinco de Mayodots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 42
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
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    Description:
       Just a quick, goofy (? me? ) Cinco de Mayo poem.

    Happy Cinco de Mayo & cheers 2 All!

    Love,Peace,Joy!!!


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    dotsCinco de Mayodots
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    Cinco de Mayo
    is here
    a festive occassion
    4 drinking Mexican beer

    & perhaps a margarita,
    yesterday Tiffany
    today Juanita!!!

    I shall don my
    sombrero
    for i've got
    not a care-o

    Muy bonita
    splendid
    senorita!!!




    Submitted on 2005-05-05 12:50:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Aww, that's not fair! Us Oz boys don't know no Spanish! I Know! I'll play my Herb Albert album all day, I'll stuff a lemon in my Fosters and I'll pretend my Akubra hat is a sombrero.
    Yeah, that'll do it.
    Epa Epa Andale Arriva! (I watched bugs bunny)
    Thanks Tiff
    Be Happy
    Graeme
    | Posted on 2005-05-06 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]
      Well you've stayed true to your abbreviated and symbolic poetry. I enjoyed the piece, it was light-hearted and humorous. 'I shall don my sombrero, for I've not a care-o', that is very good stuff and I wish I had written it. Always enjoy reading your poetry, keep up the good work! Take care, Diamond Dan
    | Posted on 2005-05-05 00:00:00 | by dmm | [ Reply to This ]
      well, this was cute, but its funny, because i was just reading in the metro today that Cinco de Mayo has become such a commercialized holiday, an excuse for young Latinos and even non-Latinos to drink. but, all seriousness aside, this made me smile, so good job. bb

    XoXo
    ~TaY~
    | Posted on 2005-05-05 00:00:00 | by Phoenix2004 | [ Reply to This ]
      Yeah, but you have to have one of those "Special" Cinco De Mayo Sombreros with the funnels on'em...Yeah ok...this was a fun cinco de mayo poem, just as you said! so there :)
    | Posted on 2005-05-05 00:00:00 | by Stwcjj | [ Reply to This ]
      Ariba bonita senorita! Andale, andale...con queso!

    This was a fun and festive read for a good day...but like we always say...Who needs a day on a calendar to celebrate, right? Every day is new years eve...cinco de mayo...birthday...whatever. Have a great one and keep smilin'
    | Posted on 2005-05-05 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      lmfao...this is what I like about you and dave y'all aint afraid to be silly and goofy and just have fun!

    Feliz cinco de mayo!
    | Posted on 2005-05-05 00:00:00 | by Brownsdelight | [ Reply to This ]


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