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    dots Submission Name: What I Want Part 2dots
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    Author: Kitty
    ASL Info:    14/F/Vermont
    Elite Ratio:    2.51 - 23/29/12
    Words: 15
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Longing
    Total Views: 684
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    Bytes: 113



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       Now I rhyme


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    dotsWhat I Want Part 2dots
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    Bush Baby Belly
    Platapus Nose
    Flamingo Knees
    Giraffe Toes
    This is what I want, please




    Submitted on 2005-05-05 19:17:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I felt this one was truly inspired. it took me 42.79 seconds to write! You Suck! Bad Elite Skills! un-Elite Skills! Rrrrrrrr Post me Bi-otch!
    | Posted on 2005-05-05 00:00:00 | by Kitty | [ Reply to This ]


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