This is definately positive although I have to say that this takes me down memory lane as well. The simple rhyming and themes remind me of my early writes, not that they are bad, just similar. I think this is one of the best way to express feelings as not many people expect rhymes and when they get them, it's surprising, and I was still taken aback by some of the rhymes. Nice work.
I really liked this poem. It makes me think of the feelings I have been going through. I actually like the repeation in this one too. It wasn't a over kill. Love is hard to love but we learn to do it even if it hurts to do so. Good Job! ~~Donna~~
i like it even I also find it easier to hate then to love but since nothing ever comes easy to me i have it eched in my mind to be a hard ass so i ALWAYS do everything the hard way and let me tell u it was very hard falling in love and STAYING in love with my boyfriend cuz he's a hard ass too but im gettin off the subject well great write hey do me a favor and read my poem " Follow Your Heart" youll understand where i'm comin from -Darkwarrior