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    Author: andnow
    ASL Info:    19.f.wa
    Elite Ratio:    3.57 - 136/135/42
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 607
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 467



    Description:
       self explaintory i think


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    dotsthis is for youdots
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    Yes, this ones for you
    we can sit in the shade
    we can play in the sand
    we can listen to the beach
    I can lay in your hands

    leave the world behind
    the worries dissolve
    the grains of memories
    delicate memories
    fabricated memories

    drift on a cloud
    look over a mountain
    touch the stars
    float down a river
    fall in the snow
    experience life with me




    Submitted on 2005-05-06 01:43:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Yea it was a good write but...the repeation was a little to much for me in the last stanza. Yea tweak that and it will be better. Good Job! ~~Donna~~
    | Posted on 2005-05-06 00:00:00 | by ThatWasOnceMe | [ Reply to This ]


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