Seperation
mind from body
a soul on fire
soaring through the fabric of the universe
longing to find
this thing unknown
a deep desire
to believe
my mind and soul travelling through existance
like two lovers
inseperable by space and time
ever searching
always searching
for more.
A distance inmeasurable
stretching my astral cord
to the point of breaking.
So close i can feel its warmth
a knowledge of existance
and then all at once...
letting go...
I open my eys and take a deep breath
reflecting on my travels
And remembering that reaccuring feeling...
of disappointment.
I truly understand this and I genuinely love it. I myself am obsessed with the astral plane and this is the first poem I've ever read that actually touches on its existance.
I definately like this. It was very deep. It could have been a little confusing to some people. I just thought it was great, it pulled my right in. You drew a picture in my mind. Good work!
I liked it even though i sort of don't understand it all...i've had that feeling where something is unattainable yet sooo close but it elludes us...good write
I've had alot of these same feeling in my search for answers about life. You do a great job in opening your heart up and expressing how you feel. Your Poetry reminds me of some of mine. You should read some. Welcome to the site. Lynn
it was good but there are a few spelling mistakes but other then that the lines are very powerful"soaring through the fabric of the universe longing to find this thing unknown" the line is so ture, a lot of us are always looking for some thing that we don't know
Submission Name: Astral Plane
