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Twisted Thoughts

Author: Enleigh
ASL Info:    16/f/WI
Elite Ratio:    2.32 - 21 /32 /13
Words: 121
Class/Type: Poetry /Angry
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Twisted Thoughts

Many nights my mind gets tied in knots
never being able to forget, your sadistic plots

Everything you did
must have been carefully planned out
you think your smart
but i know what your about

you think you've got it all
well hunny, dont get to comfortable
because your about to FALL!

well, well, look whos the smart one now
I figured you out
and now you ask me how?

I'll never fall into your hurtfull ways
dont you see, it wasnt that hard
beacause I'll never forget your fucked up phrase

I will never crawl down to you
dont try to munipulate me too.


Submitted on 2005-05-06 11:10:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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