Like the style you wrote this in tiff very original to me and a mind teaser at worst with a great message that drop like water drops slowing then hitting hard bursting with information. Deep and very reflective poem you got here girly lol. I liked this about your poem "The Copper Penny fell down the 2nd story walk a l l i n gleaming wish.... rippled waters of expectation" always write poetry, Cheryl.
Yes, I too tire of all this rain. Isnt this supposed to be "sunny" CA??? Rain, rain go away...it will...but its supposed to be back Sunday. Oar well. At least the fields are green, green, green. May your wish come true. Shabbadee-Shabbadoo...you are natures voice and for that she blesses you. Have a great one and keep smilin'
I think you've invented a new poetry form...an EPIPHARU. I'm getting to like the falling letters, might try it. Nice description of a wish (rippled waters of expectation - nice!) Wish on, Tiff! and Be Happy Graeme