Hey this is an "ILL" piece man..its so straight in your face and no beating around the bush!I dig its authoritarean...stance...The flow is so radical!I dig the piece...guess I also dont want to wake up..when Im dreaming about wonderland!Big up...Nobantu
I like it alot. I like how you said " Haters couldn't hang with me even if I gave them a noose." that was beautiful...i like it very much...I know exactly what you mean...When haters are hating but they can't fade you...you keep on rapping ...I hope to hear some more of your things...and look out for some of mine.
You topping me is unlike-Lee Like my first name is Bruce I'm just showing off the skills This one ain't written for you
LLLLLLAAAAAAAAAAMMMMMEEEEEEE! This sucks! LOL How does it feel??? People are basically saying that your writing has turn to SHIT.......the plot thickens LOL.......This is true entertainment ......you really are a playwright aren't you?????? XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX.....(p.s. your LAME)
I want to agree with hyproglo...I miss the writings about love and paranoia. They were the poems that best touched my heart. The rest of it is good...yet it is all retaliation. That is something that every once in a while...people like to read...but when that is all you do anymore...you lose readers. I miss the stuff that I would add to my favorites and actually be in awwwwww after I read it.
You have freestyling skills. I will never deny that. But a freestyle love poem...Yup yup...that's what I'm waiting for.
yeah, u know i'm gonna say 'good job' in a rap by now, don't ya: don't leave the craft if the craft ain't left you you're arm went dead don't let you're brain sleep too don't leave us on skills without a mentor either you the jay-z here so if to keep you calls for an ether i'll take up the pen and go up against the king i'll stay on your case like "precious wants your ring" slander you and man-handle every rap you wrote just to let you know its cuz we don't want you to go ~nahlij
i hope this ain't about/for what/who i think it is... anyway, i guess you had to make a comeback. seriously though, you gotta do like fab said "erase them haters, and underestimaters". just brush it off and keep going. don't let the little things get to you. but anyway, this is good. ...bb...
Testify xtreme lol wow this was great freestyle presentation and just think you did this to make a moral point lol...don't mess with the writing "G" cause his pen is sharper than the deadliest sword...keep writing and rapping and congratulations on your directing debute and break a leg is that what they say in show bizness? `always write poetry, Cheryl.
lol, awesome X. only one thing, technically it's not *free style* poetry, because in poetry definitions that would mean it is lacking a rhyme scheme which this is not...anyway, lol, this was wickedly awesome. I missed reading your stuff! lol. See you around! -Caribou-
Sometimes hate can produce great writing and you showed that here. Many people can take that hate and write about it, and many do. Its kind of like you hate being hated but enjoy it at the same time and reciprocate it in fashionable rhyme. Hey, that rhymed, HA! At least thats what I got out of this. But there is only so much hating that can go on before it gets as old and stale as bread will do...before you know it, it produces spores of bacteria that will overwhelm the entire loaf...and soon you will be forced to throw the bread away, ya know? Anyway, I enjoy your writings about love and pot paranoia fears too and wish I could read more of that from you...for you do have talent. Whats that old saying, with great power comes great responsibility... Anyway, just rambling. Have a good one and keep writin'. DAve