This is such a strong poem! Very short in length but very rich in depth on an emotional level. This is really good! I hear every word you speak here too! Sometimes people we think are our good friends turn out to be anything but that! I have learned that in my life and it seems to always be learned at the times that are hardest when you need them the most and find out that they are not there for you! I bet it helped make you feel better when you wrote this. I find that expressing my feelings onto paper, into a poem somehow 'releases' a lot for me. Anyway, nice poem! Take care!
Sometimes it seems that friends do have thorns and will let you down and sometimes without really meaning to do so I think. But, the ones that let you down,prick you with their thorns and stab you in the back are the ones we can't continue to call friends 'cause a true friend would never do that to you. This was a good write and sometimes it helps to just get it out, doesn't it? !Doc`
This isn't bad, but it seems a bit ordinary to me. The language isn't really unique. The images could be fresher. I also think that if you're going to use rhyme, I think it should be subtle. Perhaps you could experiment with different types of rhyme and different rhyme schemes.
wow. short and yet sooo powerful. i liked the rage and although its not really u now, only a maximum of what you could be, i still really liked it. and you being able to portray it like that just proves u as a good writer. keep up the good work.