ok i think that this is really good and the repetition of the stanza's worked out really well and created this desperate need for this person to notice her to see her. thats great its real and raw great job
Wow! This is really good. I definetly can relate to what you're feeling in this poem. I really like the affect of repeating the stanza: And I dream of your hands so big, not like mine Dont be afraid Just touch me Hold me Oh those hands.