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    dots Submission Name: Rejectiondots
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    Author: WindEmpress
    ASL Info:    15/f/meditating
    Elite Ratio:    3.15 - 95/124/44
    Words: 85
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 254
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       Do we have a name for a person like this: love sick?


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    dotsRejectiondots
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    How can I tell you how I truely feel
    When I've be shunned away so long ago
    And I'm afraid of human eyes to even look at me
    How can I tell you that my heart soars to be yours
    When there seems to be no place for me
    I pray to god that you'll tell me some day
    And I won't have to fear rejection again
    I want to be with you until my last breathe dies away
    And together shall our souls remain




    Submitted on 2005-05-06 21:49:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      You have no idea how amazing i think your poem is. I feel so moved. When I read it I felt really identified with it because I've felt that way, and I think the feeling is still alive in me, so alive I even felt some tears trying to come out from my eyes when I read your poem. i don't think there's something else from me to say, but keep that inspiration comming cause you got it!
    | Posted on 2005-05-07 00:00:00 | by rachel gless | [ Reply to This ]
      i liked it, you put a lot of emotion into it and im sorry if you really feel like that, just reading it allows me to imagine your frustration. great write.
    | Posted on 2005-05-06 00:00:00 | by Mia | [ Reply to This ]
      Aww! That's sad. It explains more about you. You should start checking over your work, cause you make simple mistakes dear. Truly (not truely), breath (not breathe), and God should be capitilized because it's a name. About the poem, I loved it. Showed deeper into your heart as I vaguely stated before. Never worry, because I'll never shun you dear. Neither will any of your friends here. It was in the past and those people were...well I can't say it here but you get the point. So what if you're lovesick? It's a good feeling, I'm sure. He'll see it soon enough. ~SirensSong~
    | Posted on 2005-05-06 00:00:00 | by SirensSong | [ Reply to This ]
      awww. i liked it. most of my poems are about losing love and how much it sucks, so i must say u have made an impact on me. this was good. break it up into 2 stanzas. it just makes readers happy to see them. lol. anyways, thats all i've got.

    ~Abby~
    | Posted on 2005-05-06 00:00:00 | by BCute | [ Reply to This ]



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