well...I am going to pertend I got it. What I got from it is that two people go oppisites way, but they were destined for eachother. I may just be crazy... but if that is what it was trying to say... then the symbols tell it perfect and no poem could do that. Its really good.
! ? * * ?...We are all one? I always feel so retarded with things like this. We are all the same? We all equal the same? Two are better than one? Okay, I may be dim this morning, but I am intrigued with this. I will be back after my green tea. xxxxR.
well i had not read any of your work in a whil and so i came to read one and i though i will choose something probably more resent and so i picked this one. well good work and like every one else said you sumed it up in the least amount of symboles posable. great work lol. talk to youlater lia
well, ya pretty much sumed it up there. and honestly i don't think you could've done it any better. it took major thought to think this up*redundant, srry*.lol. i liked this lil reminder of our [censored]ed up world.~nahlij
I love this! My take- "To be, or not to be, that is the question!" You must really enjoy reading the posts on this post! Thought provoking, yet whimsical. I must see what else you have come up with. Great entry!
Whether we are less or great we equal the same. Like if your good or evil, we are both equal in the eyes of God. Or I'm just as mixed up as everyone else. I'm sure when you explain it, it'll make perfect sense. This is a great puzzler to start off everyone's weekend. Carol
Ed had to come back to tell you how I appreciate you explaining this wonderful poem written in poetry code that you can trust me with the secret won't type it out in this little box... make your readers ponder as hard as I did lol. Very uniquly creative Ed. Great write and always write poetry, Cheryl.
I feel like I've just been given a riddle, or a math equation to solve. The greater and lesser are equal to ... what? I'd say .. we're ALL equal...it's what we do with what we've got that makes us individual... that makes us different. We're all given something in life to work with.. it's what we make it...that counts. Anyway...this was quite clever...and original. ~Sandra
i swear, you must be the only person in the world who can write such a thought provoking poem without using words! this is really clever. makes you think... and i'm thinking... haha, Stw may be right. is an amoeba the lowest of the low? no doubt god is the highest... grr, now i'm confused. anyway, good write. ...bb...
Greater than less than or equal to what indeed :)...I guess I'd have to say a wee bit of both or all :) And I guess again that depends on who you ask :) I enjoyed the symbolism you used instead of words...hmmmmmmm how about greater than ameoba less than god equal to each other there, that's the answer! :)
Ed now this is abstract my friend certainly unique...something that defininately has me thinking manically what the @#@#...i am stumped lol. You got to promise to explain this submission to me ...just to deep for me ...and out the box yeap out the box like the title The Human Race...explain the rest to me... always write poetry, Cheryl
ha! I recently read something online that was done with symbols but it was in relation to computers, and not ppl. I suppose that's poetry . . . though you're definately pushing the ummm . . . definition here!