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    dots Submission Name: Fatedots
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    Author: Destined
    ASL Info:    17/f/wisconsin
    Elite Ratio:    5.29 - 86/68/17
    Words: 181
    Class/Type: Rant/Misc
    Total Views: 234
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 880



    Description:
       umm my friend Liz told me to continue something that I sent to her (I'm thinking this is it) so without getting her answer if this was really it or not, I created a little something.

    Thoughts while writing it: umm.... Mostly, people ask me if I know things that are right there. At times it bugs me but what I can do right? I have tarot cards and my brother asks me alot to read them for him. I just wonder about people and what goes on inside their head, that's all.

    It's confusing I know, it's almost like what I'm talking about is part of you... I guess.


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    You tell me what you are destined for. For I am nothing more than an eye, a watcher. I can only see what happens now. I can not see in the future for all I am is a mirror. You know what I see, you know what I know. The question is not if I know what you are destined for, the question is really, do you know what you are destined for?

    For happiness comes pain, for love comes heart breaks. I can tell you all that you can hear, all that you can see. For, when you stare at that knife, your condense can not be heard or seen around, all you can see is me.

    My face lingers in your soul forever. I know what you know, think what you think. Thoughts are that combined, as you lower that knife. I neither praise you or deny you for what you are. You are you, I am me. All I can is watch.

    So tell me, do you know what you are destined for?




    Submitted on 2005-05-07 16:09:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very thought-provoking, and full of little tid-bits to think about.
    I liked this, it's complex yet easy to read, and asks a bucket of questions withour professing an opinion.
    Well done
    Be Happy
    Graeme
    | Posted on 2005-05-07 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]
      See nanana that was what I was talking about, and looked it turned into a sweet poem, in this poem it does seem like you are questioning yourself but everyone does that, so nanana what are you destined for?
    | Posted on 2005-05-07 00:00:00 | by Fadingperson | [ Reply to This ]
      I think that this is an alright peom or whatever it is. It made me think of what is this thing you're writing about?
    I also thought what are we all destined for because we don't know for sure and can never predict the future.
    | Posted on 2005-05-07 00:00:00 | by sheltie | [ Reply to This ]



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