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    dots Submission Name: Cunning Linguist?dots
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    Author: BenCollier
    Elite Ratio:    3.72 - 425/386/88
    Words: 175
    Class/Type: Spoof/Comedy
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    Description:
       With apologies to Dr. Suese. Not for kiddies!!!


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    dotsCunning Linguist?dots
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    I like going down I do, I like it as much as to screw
    I like to eat that tasty box, I like to eat it cause you a fox
    I like to see your face glean; I like to lick your platter clean

    I will eat it here and there, I will eat it everywhere
    I will eat it on a train, I will eat it and you won’t complain
    I will eat it near and far, I will eat it in our car

    I like to see you wiggle and squeal, I like to make it feel surreal
    I like to give you goose bumps; I like to see you wear black pumps
    I like when you grab my hair, I like when you touch me there

    I will eat it in our bed, I will eat it without dread
    I will eat it with great zeal, I will eat it as a meal
    I will eat it everyday, I will eat it NOW, OK?




    Submitted on 2005-05-07 17:15:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hahahaha....... I like this,,, very funny .. ilove it from the title to the end. very funny and it takes a srtong man to be able to put this out there with pride!! most just whisper it in secret
    | Posted on 2006-08-04 00:00:00 | by mimi | [ Reply to This ]
      This was very funny, I enjoyed the break from everything being so serious around here. I'm not sure how much time you actually put into this... seems like a boring day at work when you were extremely horny. But still funny none the less!!
    | Posted on 2005-07-20 00:00:00 | by kriley6497 | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh...my side hurts! too funny bro! That is the first thing on here that has made me laugh out loud...maybe I am identifying with the theme wayyyy too much...I gotta read more of your stuff!
    Two thumbs way up!
    D.A.T.
    | Posted on 2005-05-10 00:00:00 | by Deep Ace Thinks | [ Reply to This ]
      LOL!!!

    I just read stolie's 'Going Down' - and then saw this in her faves...

    What a day this is turning out to be :)

    I have a feeling I will have trouble returning to my oh-so-serious research project :)))

    All the best,

    Katia
    | Posted on 2005-05-10 00:00:00 | by Katia | [ Reply to This ]
      Jeez Dave, U got more balls than me! Cleverly done, my man, no escaping the delight behind this one! Very tongue in cheek! (LOL)
    wow
    be happy
    Graeme
    | Posted on 2005-05-10 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]
      LMFAO!


    yee-haw! bout time theres a poem on here for this...and a man not afraid to talk about it! what a giver you are! LOL

    this is a hilarious XXX take on Dr. Seuse...too funny!

    -Nikki
    | Posted on 2005-05-10 00:00:00 | by stolie77 | [ Reply to This ]
      Lol. Wonderful, Ben. You brought a whole new light to something that isn't touched upon much. You always have delightful poems, although you're right about this not being for young ones. I'm speechless, and holding back a smirk here. Have a great and wonderful day!

    Arianna Marie
    | Posted on 2005-05-10 00:00:00 | by Areinaka | [ Reply to This ]
      ballsy.ill give ya that.variety is the spice of life ill say.this was a cool surprise.
    ok with the word scheme.not a very common subject in the poetic field
    scratch that,just protrayed differently
    as all can be
    cool
    wes all toyysruss
    | Posted on 2005-05-08 00:00:00 | by toyysruss | [ Reply to This ]
      I dont really think this poem is funny. I dont think its very well written. the only reason why i even checked it out is because cunning linguists are a bad assed [censored] underground group so get with it-write about something that's real-

    peace

    key wester
    | Posted on 2005-05-07 00:00:00 | by Key Wester | [ Reply to This ]


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