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    dots Submission Name: My Quesadilladots
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    Author: Kitty
    ASL Info:    14/F/Vermont
    Elite Ratio:    2.51 - 23/29/12
    Words: 57
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
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    dotsMy Quesadilladots
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    I love my Quesadilla
    I take a Tortilla
    With a lot of cheese
    That traveled the seven seas
    A couple tomatoes
    But no potatoes
    And bacon bits
    Now that just drives me out of my wits
    All melted and hot
    It really hits the spot
    That kind of quesadilla is just yum
    Yes, you can have some...




    Submitted on 2005-05-07 21:47:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Thank you all so very much. I wrote it because I felt my quesadilla was so delicious it deserved a tribute. This poem really came from the heart. BTW, I specialize it randomness. The guy I wrote "Can't Stop Thinking About You" about told me to write the poem because I couldn't stop talking about the quesadilla. Just thought you should know this vital background on it.
    | Posted on 2005-05-18 00:00:00 | by Kitty | [ Reply to This ]
      i love quesadillas there almost the best foods! anyway ur poem i think had great rhyming and the flow was good too. and i'll gladly have one!
    | Posted on 2005-05-11 00:00:00 | by tickles8 | [ Reply to This ]
      Lol, thats funny, I love quesidillas! Tasty. Now you made me hungry! But the poem was a little odd, but I liked it. Maybe if you take away the bacon bits, (yuck)
    | Posted on 2005-05-10 00:00:00 | by fallenpopcorn10 | [ Reply to This ]
      I really loved this. It was intresting and I don't think I've read something about this, or if I have it wasn't as good as yours. The last line was really cute, and the overall thing gets an A+
    | Posted on 2005-05-07 00:00:00 | by Akili | [ Reply to This ]
      its cute! its pretty random, though. maybe work on the flow a little bit, it was kind of strange. but other than that, it's funny
    | Posted on 2005-05-07 00:00:00 | by salamander | [ Reply to This ]


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