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    dots Submission Name: Variegateddots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 9
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 547
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 68

       A lovely river poem brought on by a wonderful book on painting, a nice bottle of wine & bubbles blown by the beach!

    My Copper Penny Wish came true ~ the Sun graced us with her presence today!

    Enjoy the weekend and don't forget your mother's! Love,Peace,Joy!!! epiph ; > )

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    Variegated wash
    merge colors into wet
    strokes of white

    Submitted on 2005-05-07 23:42:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      First I actually had to look up what " Variegated" lol and I took the "dapple in variety" for the meaning of this poem because you mentioned a book of paintings in your description...which makes this a great SENYRU not Haiku which is about nature...Tiff most excellent and always write poetry, Cheryl.
    | Posted on 2005-05-09 00:00:00 | by ladyngold | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey now, you tricked me :)...this was a Haiku not prose :P :P :P...That's okay though...quite an interesting bit o' writing :) Happy Mom's day again! :)

    | Posted on 2005-05-08 00:00:00 | by Stwcjj | [ Reply to This ]

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