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    dots Submission Name: Holy Landzdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 22
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Love
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    Description:
       I watched the 'Kingdom of Heaven' and it's amazing that 1,000 years ago is no different today in the battle for the Holy Land of Jerusalem. Pity no one ever considered that land was not a place, per say, but perhaps a person or persons, and what is holy is carried in heart and soul. That is the ultimate battle, if only of ourselves to discover this.

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    dotsHoly Landzdots
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    For tHE Holy Landz
    were born
    of
    tHE womb;
    Given 2 LIFE
    Everywhere HIS
    Spirit
    "IS"
    carried by VIRTUE
    not won




    Submitted on 2005-05-07 23:49:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This was nice and very introspective. Makes you wonder why they have to battle over land just because of beliefs, ya know? I think you hit it on the head though, every person should believe that the holy land is wherever they are standing. Nice write. Have a great one and keep smilin'
    | Posted on 2005-05-09 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      Quite a good point you point out :) The term Holy War is kind of funny. To me a holy war should be a battle with ones self over their spirituality...but I guess this has been the culture clash throughout time. Religion verse religion <shrug> maybe someday we'll all get along :)

    Stw (thanks for the good write and happy Mom'sday!)
    | Posted on 2005-05-08 00:00:00 | by Stwcjj | [ Reply to This ]


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