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    dots Submission Name: Escapedots
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    Author: Destined
    ASL Info:    17/f/wisconsin
    Elite Ratio:    5.29 - 86/68/17
    Words: 131
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 298
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 691



    Description:
       took part from a show and part from real life. One of my friends was having love life troubles so I sent her this poem and she understood what I was trying to tell her. (for that's when I made it up) It helps those who may need to help understand that you can overcome everything with time.


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    No matter how much you wish for love. No matter how much you offer your heart, you will not get anything back from others. You can not escape from saddness. The life you live must be one that suffers.

    Take my hand and lets fly together.

    At this very moment, you are a bird resting their wings inside a cage. You have lost sight of the sky in which you should be flying. If you stay in this cage much longer, you will lose the ability to fly. But, if you have courage, you might still be free. You havn't lost your wings yet, have you? Do you really want to keep your heart in prison in this cage forever?

    Take my hand and lets fly together.




    Submitted on 2005-05-08 06:50:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      wow, this was really sweet. i love the metaphor about being a bird in a cage... sounds like a poem of mine... anyway, your friend is really lucky. this was a beautiful, inspirational poem.

    "Do you really want to keep your heart in prison in this cage forever?"

    favorite line. good job. ...bb...

    XoXo
    ~TaY~
    | Posted on 2005-05-08 00:00:00 | by Phoenix2004 | [ Reply to This ]
      That was awesome nanana, i love the take my hands and let's fly away, I guess at one point in time we all feel like we are caged, good right my sweet nananana Wuv ya
    ~liz~
    | Posted on 2005-05-08 00:00:00 | by Fadingperson | [ Reply to This ]
      This is really good. I love everything you said. And youre right. It made me start to think. Im kind of in a cage... But you gave me hope, and I havent lost my wings yet. I love this. Great job :-)
    | Posted on 2005-05-08 00:00:00 | by Liv2LoveThePain | [ Reply to This ]



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