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Author: Mia
ASL Info:    17/F/MD
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Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Well in school we were learning about unique poetry stories and had to write our own...this was one of them lol


soiototoionog oaolonoe
sotoaoroionog oionoto onoootohoionogonoeosos
woaotocohoionogo otohoe ogoroaososo gorooow

Submitted on 2005-05-08 13:40:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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Sitting alone
Staring into nothingness
Watching the grass grow

| Posted on 2008-02-19 00:00:00 | by Mia | [ Reply to This ]
  Well, it's unique. The only thing about stuff like that is it's rarely accessible. I like the poem alone, but the o's are kind of distracting. I think I'd like it more as a plain old minimalist poem.
| Posted on 2005-05-08 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]
  this was really different. Hmmmm Im not sure what Im suposed to say, because at the moment I have got no clue what this means. I would normally say good write, but Im not sure if this was a write at all! lol, well um i guess good write, i guess. Not sure though.

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| Posted on 2005-05-08 00:00:00 | by Thinkingofyou | [ Reply to This ]
  . . . . . I don''t get it. Its definently unique but dose it actually mean something? Help me out here I'm majorlyconfused. I hate the have to write to much or can't coment right now. WHAT DOSE IT MEAN!
| Posted on 2005-05-08 00:00:00 | by S.A.M. | [ Reply to This ]

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