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The Illusion Of Anger

Author: Mia
ASL Info:    17/F/MD
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Words: 150
Class/Type: Poetry /Angry
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This is me trying to describe when I'm angry...because I am very rarely purely angry, and once I thought about it I decided to describe it in a poem

The Illusion Of Anger

I yell, I scream
I curse, I cry
I explode

I can no longer hide
All this anger inside
So I might as well
Just let it go

But through all my yelling
My Screaming
My Crying
I realize

Anger isn't the whole issue here
There's another feeling
A stronger one
Deep inside the pit of my stomach

Isn't anger
Supposed to be like fire?
The color red?

That isn't all I feel
Sure there is some fire
But I feel more of...

I think this feeling
Of which I'm overcome with
I think it's sadness
And gloom, and worry

This anger isn't pure
This hatred isn't real
It's all caused by my mixed emotions
My worry, my longing, my fear

So the too many feelings
They cause me frustration
Which leads to the illusion
Of anger

Submitted on 2005-05-08 14:35:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This poem about anger and its true meaning I relate to. By the way i dont hate anyone but sometimes it feels like i do. this is a good poem with lots of nice rhythim.
| Posted on 2005-09-04 00:00:00 | by josymanthegreat | [ Reply to This ]
  This could very easily be a song as well. I too have felt the feeling of just wanting to explode. I thought it was because of the anger inside me, but it wasn't. It was all the emotions I kept in and the longing for something more. I found the something more in Jesus., and I've learned to let my emotions go through poem and song. It's awesome.
| Posted on 2005-05-08 00:00:00 | by vbnz | [ Reply to This ]
  This was good. I like how it flowed from stanza to stanza.I painted a good picture of some one really angry I like it alot.
my fave line/stanza was

"Anger isn't the whole issue here
There's another feeling
A stronger one
Deep inside the pit of my stomach"

I don't it stuck wiht me when i read it.
Well i don't know what else to say hope to hear from you.
| Posted on 2005-05-08 00:00:00 | by seven11 | [ Reply to This ]

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