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    dots Submission Name: Oh! to be like her till deathdots
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    Author: darkness
    ASL Info:    19/F/my own world
    Elite Ratio:    1.84 - 524/218/40
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
    Total Views: 248
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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       this poem is about the saint rabiah basri

    curses! ill jus blame the jumping subjects on my ADD


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    dotsOh! to be like her till deathdots
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    Her smile would cheer the dead
    Her tears sweet in repentence
    gives hope for the deceased

    The path i tread
    Many a times those before have traveled

    Till the soul shall leave this body to rot
    Dwelling in the grave

    The soul shall enter barzakh
    a barrier between the living and the dead
    awaiting jugement day

    O to be like her
    to be hopeful and mindful
    to be wise as she

    O the reality of this world
    You shall soon come to see

    Indeed life is but a journy
    Death is but the beginning
    and Destiny awaits in the hereafter








    Submitted on 2005-05-08 14:57:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I just thought I would comment on this one again because I have more to say. Rabi'ah Basri is a hero to all. She was the one of the greates women . . . and not just because of her name. lol. Anyways, this one was really, truly great.

    Live, Love, & Laugh,
    Unperfect
    | Posted on 2006-02-13 00:00:00 | by UnPerfect | [ Reply to This ]
      This is really nice. We really think alike what can I say great minds think alike I like the end about Indeed life is but a journy Death is but the beginningand Destiny awaits in the hereafter. You really hit me their. Well that's all I got to say
    | Posted on 2006-02-04 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]
      o o that is so awsumful! omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg...that was just so great ! i loved it sooo sooo sooo sooo muchhh ! great job !
    | Posted on 2005-05-08 00:00:00 | by UnPerfect | [ Reply to This ]



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