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Submission Name: Oh! to be like her till death dots

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Author:	darkness
ASL Info:	19/F/my own world
Elite Ratio:	1.84 - 524/218/40
Words:	117

Class/Type:	Poetry/Death
Total Views:	248
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
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Description:
this poem is about the saint rabiah basri

curses! ill jus blame the jumping subjects on my ADD

Oh! to be like her till death dots

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Her smile would cheer the dead
Her tears sweet in repentence
gives hope for the deceased

The path i tread
Many a times those before have traveled

Till the soul shall leave this body to rot
Dwelling in the grave

The soul shall enter barzakh
a barrier between the living and the dead
awaiting jugement day

O to be like her
to be hopeful and mindful
to be wise as she

O the reality of this world
You shall soon come to see

Indeed life is but a journy
Death is but the beginning
and Destiny awaits in the hereafter

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  I just thought I would comment on this one again because I have more to say. Rabi'ah Basri is a hero to all. She was the one of the greates women . . . and not just because of her name. lol. Anyways, this one was really, truly great.

Live, Love, & Laugh,
Unperfect
| Posted on 2006-02-13 00:00:00 | by UnPerfect | [ Reply to This ]
  This is really nice. We really think alike what can I say great minds think alike I like the end about Indeed life is but a journy Death is but the beginningand Destiny awaits in the hereafter. You really hit me their. Well that's all I got to say
| Posted on 2006-02-04 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]
  o o that is so awsumful! omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg...that was just so great ! i loved it sooo sooo sooo sooo muchhh ! great job !
| Posted on 2005-05-08 00:00:00 | by UnPerfect | [ Reply to This ]

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