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    dots Submission Name: Midnight Morningdots
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    Author: iluvpoetry_1
    Elite Ratio:    2.87 - 806/439/119
    Words: 127
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Description:
       i think im in love!


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    dotsMidnight Morningdots
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    Have you ever seen a midnight morning? It's one of the most beautiful sights your eyes have ever come upon!

    Not quite midnight, not quite morning. It's the beginning of a passionate story. Filled with love, adventure and romance.

    When you find a midnight morning, you feel like you can soar through the sky.

    A midnight morning gives you hope, in the toughest of times. A midnight morning helps you find what lies deep beneath you heart.

    When you find your midnight morning, you should hold on to it. Hold on to it with all your heart. Cherish it till the end.

    I could never live without my midnight morning, and I hope this feeling that I am experiencing, never ends.




    Submitted on 2005-05-08 19:21:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      its got a good flow and the descriptions are deep.. maybe you should add more about the what goes on at that special time/place. Othgerwise its great!
    | Posted on 2005-05-08 00:00:00 | by blahblahgurl | [ Reply to This ]
      I loved the way you wrote this. Though it seems that on another level you're writing about something diffrent then a midnight morning, or maybe I'm just looking into this to deepily?
    | Posted on 2005-05-08 00:00:00 | by Akili | [ Reply to This ]
      you have a really good way to get your description across :) i liked it thumbs up
    some parts didnt really flow well but other wise it was good
    | Posted on 2005-05-08 00:00:00 | by KrisBenjamin | [ Reply to This ]
      hell your definitely in love in your delirious in love it's quite charming to see this through your eyes you were good in the descriptive point of writing this piece
    | Posted on 2005-05-08 00:00:00 | by littlepoet | [ Reply to This ]


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