Yes, @ 14 you will find that this feeling may come several times. Kissing your cousin...did she know you had these feelings 2? I don't know who I'd be more peeved at. Good job expressing your feelings and just say his loss & move on girl! Love,Peace,Joy!
Aww thats so sad. Perfect description though. And yeah, of course I know the feeling...its just too bad that its not a good one. But I suppose these things happen. Anyways, this was very nicely done. I like it a lot. Great job :-)
How many times and how many ways can one express the pain and sadness of losing love? I guess the ways are enumerable for you have found another and it is very well written. Using the bullet as a concept was quite creative. Being fourteen I think you could make one change, 2nd line last stanza:
Was the day I knew I may never love again.
Take it from a older guy, your going to love a few times before it's all over. Diamond Dan
Yeah, I liked it. Nice style you wrote this in, and you certainly don't have to think about it, the message bashes you over the head. Could have been a bit longer even, although it's hard hitting the length it is now. Well done, Be Happy Graeme