Humming in the dark by bloodwing

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Submission Name: Humming in the dark dots

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Author:	bloodwing
Elite Ratio:	3.37 - 453/512/118
Words:	61

Class/Type:	Poetry/Longing
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Humming in the dark dots

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Static
and I can't feel the air
like I used to.

Nothing is changing
and everything is the same;
yesterday's tomorrow is today.

Tomorrow is just
another 'again'.
Tomorrow is not just.

To be honest
I don't want these to be understood
but for you to understand is different.

This is me trying to understand.

Submitted on 2005-05-09 07:13:42 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  a depthness shows.and i dont want them to understand.i dont even want to.lol
i envy the people who are content with the 3 feet around them.
a little longer,maybe should be
for me
personally.wording was excellent.no imagery
i dont think imagery is important here.thinks it make ya
cool

wes all toyysruss
| Posted on 2005-05-16 00:00:00 | by toyysruss | [ Reply to This ]
  nice, i thought of the picture you have chosen with the word static. It is short but also has a feeling of being unfinshed to me... might just be me... You give the basics but it sounds like your afraid to go into the details?!
| Posted on 2005-05-15 00:00:00 | by isis_lenore | [ Reply to This ]
  well that was just a little confusing. why i really don't know but i liked the line "yesterday's tomorrow is today." you know i hate people who procrastinate and that is what that line reminds me of.
~liz~
| Posted on 2005-05-09 00:00:00 | by Fadingperson | [ Reply to This ]

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