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    dots Submission Name: How could yadots
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    Author: Darkwarrior
    ASL Info:    27
    Elite Ratio:    3.51 - 60/63/33
    Words: 341
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Fuck it all
    Total Views: 790
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2081



    Description:
       plz TRY to read it all its a really good song i think


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    dotsHow could yadots
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    Verse 1
    Sittin out in the pouring rain
    trying to figure out how I got this way
    months before I was your girl
    you and me against the world
    now I'm down on my knees
    beggin and prayin god please
    bring me back to my destiny
    bring me back to my baby
    Chorus
    Our love was here
    but now is lost
    to make it last
    came at no cost
    but now we are a-part
    cuz you had some doubts
    inside your heart
    Verse 2
    We were in love so true
    no one between
    just me and you
    now everything has changed
    our love is not the same
    how could ya stare to my face
    and now not even know my name
    how could ya play me off like that
    tryin to say I'm just a friend
    when just last week
    you were telling me
    our love will never end
    and I was your baby
    Chorus//
    Bridge
    How could ya just want me
    when you need me
    then when you are done
    you get up and leave
    Rap
    kiss me
    make me love you
    diss me
    make me take you back
    miss me
    make me forgive you
    I don't play game like that
    no more
    so go ahead leave
    here's the door
    cuz you and me
    aint shit no more
    Verse 3
    Sweet times we had
    I dont understand
    I even told my moms and dad
    that you were the only man
    I thought I was the sun
    shinin upon your world
    although we ahd some fun
    I guess I wasn't the only girl
    you told that too
    so now I'm tellin you to forget me
    Chorus//
    Verse 4
    I know right now
    I dont want you to leave
    but you gotta go
    cuz I'm tellin you so
    I'm NOT a girl to accept that
    its a fact
    I aint gettin played like that again
    that shits over
    its the end
    of you and me
    ba-by








    Submitted on 2005-05-09 08:12:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I like this a lot. Its so sad. Youre strong to admit that you need to move on, no matter how hard it is. I know its sometimes easier said than done. These are really good lyrics. Its long, but its worth taking the time to read. Great job :-)

    *nikkki
    | Posted on 2005-05-09 00:00:00 | by Liv2LoveThePain | [ Reply to This ]
      GREAT! i really like it altough i dont know much about how song lyrics are suppossed to be written i really like this...im more of a poem person but this was great you really expressed yourself and i think you did a good job..anyways keep up the good work
    RandiKae
    | Posted on 2005-05-09 00:00:00 | by RandiKae | [ Reply to This ]


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