not rubbish. i like haiku, at least you wrote right? silver lining. i might get back into some of them...the rest of my head is empty. let's hope it's a phase:P
This is really short but yet it is haiku. for such a short poem you got your point acroos. i think it could use one more line or so other than that it was good. well i don't know what telse to say hope to hear from you.
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