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    dots Submission Name: ~*AHORAMAZDA* ~dots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Love
    Total Views: 942
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    Description:
       In Farci, Ahoramazda means "Good God" ~ God IS ALL; Positive, Negative, Good, Evil, etc., etc. His completeness is often not even of our complete understanding but <@> believe and have ALL Faith in good and love, especially on this plane.

    So, this is just a brief blessing and prayer <@> gave 2 Great Spirit 4 a wonderful day and the vision to allow me negative opportunities for +/

    F*&! "I"T" Works!

    Aloha! Love,Peace,Joy~~~ Epiphany


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dots~*AHORAMAZDA* ~dots
    -------------------------------------------


    Blessed am "<@>"
    4 when 'i'
    wad all my fearz
    in 2
    1
    ball and throw them to
    U (X 2)
    R
    ; > }
    2
    accept
    and return
    "IT"
    2
    ME
    A
    Cloud of Courage ~ Selah

    When <@> frown
    in mis-understanding
    and spit frustration 2
    U (X 2)
    R
    ; > }
    2
    Accept
    & return 2
    ME
    a shower of patience ~ Selah






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      i love this! i love the way you write without really using words... second poem like this that i've read, and i think it is a really interesting and unique format. that's such a beautiful word too, "ahoramazda". sounded spanish to me for a sec until i read the description... well, beautiful poem. ...bb...

    XoXo
    ~TaY~
    | Posted on 2005-05-12 00:00:00 | by Phoenix2004 | [ Reply to This ]
      basking in the glow of these peacefully positive lines, i am floating weightless through the atmosphere and feeling as though the sun was making me a bit translucent...the "Tiffspeak" as mentioned by wewak is truly a unique, and captivating approach to poetry...
    Highly entertaing and enlightening!
    ROCK THE HELL ON TIPHERONIMO!
    luv,'
    D.A.T.
    | Posted on 2005-05-10 00:00:00 | by Deep Ace Thinks | [ Reply to This ]
      Laughing typing also Tiff cause I am reading wewak's review he is such a show off...laughing...now your poem Tiff is simply so simple simply beautiuful truly. A peaceful calm came to me when I read this "When <@> frown
    in mis-understanding
    and spit frustration 2
    U (X 2)
    R
    ; > }
    2
    Accept
    & return 2
    ME
    a shower of patience ~ Selah" Now that is wonderfully worded in this unique still you write in...only one thing I am not sure what means and you must help me so I truly get the full benefit and it is "; > }" ??? always poetry, Cheryl.


    | Posted on 2005-05-10 00:00:00 | by ladyngold | [ Reply to This ]
      Well, now...words...ummm, yeah. They fail me on this one. Tiffarina Ballarina...so let me say this...I would, can, wil, dol and want to write words that flowed and brought such friggin times such as these...ya know the "whoa! yeah thats exactly as I feel" feeling. You nailed it! The most all time of all favs. :-) And the title fits too.
    | Posted on 2005-05-10 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      Now this is an intresting peice. Quite intresting to boot. Who would have thought that using symbolism in poetry could be so fun.

    I am intreiged and look for more of the same.
    Good on you.

    :D
    | Posted on 2005-05-09 00:00:00 | by Unicrom | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey there oh high and mighty TiffEpiphBallerinaandStuff. WOnderfully peacegiving poem. Much fun to read! YeeHaw!
    Although all that talk of clouds and showers are making me think of rain...so how bout some sun????? Ok, awesome poem :)

    Keep Writiinggggggggggggggg

    <sorry, lazy finger>

    Stw
    | Posted on 2005-05-09 00:00:00 | by Stwcjj | [ Reply to This ]
      Selah. I am now doing a doctorate in Tiffspeak, and majoring in "IT" (most of the "IT" courses I googled had something to do with computers? Dickheads!)
    As they say in footy: "kick it to me...kick it to me!"
    Nice poem,
    Be Happy
    Graeme
    | Posted on 2005-05-09 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]


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