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    dots Submission Name: Cabernet Sauvignon & Cherriesdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 13
    Class/Type: Haiku/Love
    Total Views: 450
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 98



    Description:
       A nice relaxing, stormy evening my sup of Cabernet Sauvignon & Fresh picked cherries! (Do not attempt this nutritional escapade as <@> AM a Professional ~ & I'm not an Administrative Goddess but I play 1 on tv...he he he)

    I raise my cup 2 ALL tHE EliTIsts! Qualantalaqua!


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    dotsCabernet Sauvignon & Cherriesdots
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    Fortify your hearts
    Nature'z wine 2 blushed
    All ripened fruitz





    Submitted on 2005-05-09 19:30:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Nice little piece of work. I only have 1 question-what's 'Qualantalaqua' mean? I think you told me, but us old folks forget things pretty quick. Huh? Where am I?

    Peace,

    Joey
    | Posted on 2005-05-11 00:00:00 | by joeyalphabet | [ Reply to This ]
      HIGH...



    COOOO...

    mmmm...yummy combo...

    I'm still pretty intimidated by them too...but you apparently have achieved mastery of the form...
    you are like the haiku yoda...er sumpthin...
    And a haiku with Tiph-speak ta boot!

    Rock the hell on Tiphersippit!

    D.A.T.
    | Posted on 2005-05-10 00:00:00 | by Deep Ace Thinks | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey Haikus are fun and so are puns

    There once was a mole
    that took alichen to the tree.

    I liked that one because it's short and to the point. it lets the avid conosure experience a well rehersed after dinner ritual.
    | Posted on 2005-05-10 00:00:00 | by Unicrom | [ Reply to This ]
      lol awsome! its so short and powerful...im like only 14 but i totally enjoy sitting down to a glass of wine at dinner usually merlot and ice wine with dessert.. awsome haiku...and im sort of seeing some like message here...but im not sure so im just not going to say anything. lol
    muchlove-ash
    | Posted on 2005-05-10 00:00:00 | by DanceADream | [ Reply to This ]
      Quite a nice and lovely toast to us all here at Elite.
    Can almost hear our glasses *tink.
    Cheers to you! :) :) :)
    ~Sandra
    | Posted on 2005-05-10 00:00:00 | by Intricate1 | [ Reply to This ]
      So, ever since Cheryl turned me onto haikus (bless u) I have been so amazed yet intimidated by them...because you only have three short lines and three syllable rules to live by...therefore you have to get your point across sharp and quickly. This is one of those that truly does that and its just awesome to read good haikus (bless u). I see your point here and I know what you are talking about...but since I am the first person to comment, I am not going to spoil it for others...because it is so crystal clear that they should be able to figure it out too. But nice, nice job ma dear, nice indeedy. I like it.
    | Posted on 2005-05-10 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]


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