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    dots Submission Name: My Spirit: from IdProjectdots
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    Author: Amissa
    ASL Info:    18 female NWIndiana
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 5/1/3
    Words: 119
    Class/Type: Poetry/Me
    Total Views: 192
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 820



    Description:
       Of course it's in first person, it's from my identity project! Done for creative writing 2 in about two minutes while I was really tired and not thinking. Go ahead, tell me whatever you have to say...


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    dotsMy Spirit: from IdProjectdots
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    Burning, running, spinning, sliding,
    Rushing forward, then colliding

    With the stars who never expected
    Sitting there glittering, unprotected

    From my force, my courage, my power
    My will, my strength stands like a tower

    Tall and invisible to the masses
    Heedless to the wind that passes

    The wind that whispers, calls my name
    Telling me to keep things the same

    That same is safe and change brings danger
    But danger's never been a stranger

    And same has never kept me safe
    It's left me lonely like a waif

    In the alley of a broken promise
    Shedding tears for those I miss

    And I can't bear another moment
    Of drowning in your desire




    Submitted on 2005-05-09 22:20:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Very nice. I like the idea. Being strong but vunerable. I particularly liked the 2nd and 5th stanzas. Powerful. Not too bad for being tired and not thinking:)
    | Posted on 2006-04-26 00:00:00 | by Scribner | [ Reply to This ]
      "That same is safe and change brings danger
    But danger's never been a stranger"
    I really liked that line. The way this poem flows is awesome. I like. Keep up the good work.
    | Posted on 2005-05-10 00:00:00 | by my_plague_year | [ Reply to This ]



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