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    dots Submission Name: FIRE CANNOT BURN MEdots
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    Author: Desser
    ASL Info:    20
    Elite Ratio:    3.83 - 89/95/44
    Words: 170
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsFIRE CANNOT BURN MEdots
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    Fire cannot burn me.
    Without it, I cannot live.
    The touch sets me free.
    What do I have to give?

    I walk the Earth with one fear.
    It follows me into my dreams.
    Strangling me until I tear,
    Burning me away it seems.

    Truth be told, I cannot burn.
    My body yields the flames.
    But in my dreams, things turn.
    And I cannot be tamed.

    Will they consume me?
    Those flames that I contain.
    They are a wonderous key
    To which I can die in vain.

    Surely I can avoid this
    With my heart and mind,
    Promising me bliss,
    But it's only a matter of time.

    Follow me into the stream,
    Down the waterfalls.
    Weakness is the dream,
    I can hear its powerful calls.

    The ash is all around
    But the fire has not begun.
    This destiny I am bound.
    Hear the horrid gun.

    Fire cannot burn me.
    With it, I am great.
    The flame is no agony,
    It is my life's gate.




    Submitted on 2005-05-10 16:41:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this makes me think of a crowd of people all with flames burning inside them, fueled by thier dreams and hopes. like a flame that keeps you from staring in cold blankness at the world around you. it's really good. i love it
    | Posted on 2005-05-11 00:00:00 | by Anticlownperson | [ Reply to This ]
      loved it ... thats all i can really say i mean i just so happen to be quite smitten when it comes to flames and fire idk why exactly i guess it just calms me... but this is when we ask do we control the fire or does it control us?
    | Posted on 2005-05-10 00:00:00 | by broken_dreamer | [ Reply to This ]



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